Tuesday, 20 December 2011

Assignment w51;lyric

The assignment for this week was to write a lyric with: atleast eight lines, rhyme, alliteration and consistent metre.

This assignment was hard, this because I'm writing so much lyrics and stuff in Swedish. Different people, have different type of writing and alliteration isn't my cup of tea. Atleast I can't find alliteration in this poem below.
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The ambivalent Rose!


I gave her a rose,
and she swallowed my hand.
I think I was supposed,
to be in the romantic’s land.

Think about what a Rose can do:
Swallow hands and emotions too.
I love you and you love me
Then why are we two not
supposed to be we?

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